Diorama "All... Have come..."

[kolche]

Hi all !
At last has completed.
I will be glad to your opinion and councils.

 

[mike walsh]

Hi Aleksandr,

I like the base how its tiered and it looks good.
The figures and panzer 1 look excellent .

The panzer 1 I feel may need to be positioned in or near centre of the road.
Thats if you are not having any other vehicles.
As a quick suggestion I'd pose the motorcycle rider near the guy in front of the tank .

Apart from than that this is an outstanding effort on a great looking dio .

Michael

 

[kolche]

Reiorama

mike walsh wrote:

Hi Aleksandr,

I like the base how its tiered and it looks good.
The figures and panzer 1 look excellent .

The panzer 1 I feel may need to be positioned in or near centre of the road.
Thats if you are not having any other vehicles.
As a quick suggestion I'd pose the motorcycle rider near the guy in front of the tank .

Apart from than that this is an outstanding effort on a great looking dio .

Michael

Thanks Michael!
I will try to correct, I will add after even vehicle or something another
Thanks for council.

 

[carabinier]

great work very atmospheric

 

[moon puppy]

Very well done, I agree with Mike, needs something more or balance the subjects. Seems everything is out to the edges. Love the figures.

 

[Gremlin]

Job well done B) B) Nice work.
Adam

 

[sabla]

Yes I agree with the writers before after some new positioning it looks better.

But at the moment the components are still looking great.


Is the small building scrath build?


greets Mirko

 

[53Chevy]

Love all the detail on such a small tank. The guy with the sledge hammer? Is he giving up and going to do some "fine" tuning? lol. Nice stuff. Ryan

 

[AndyFettes]

Excellent stuff but if I may comment I feel that the figures are too far spaced apart and are not interacting with each other.

Andy

 

[AndyFettes]

Excellent stuff but if I may comment I feel that the figures are too far spaced apart and are not interacting with each other.

Andy

 

[Yago Alonso]

Excellent work!
I like it more, and I like the figures and the diorama-base too.

Thanks for showing us.

Yago.

 

[Cheyenne]

Kolche , very , very cool !!!

The water shed is excellent and the Pz 1 is beautiful .

Everything else works and represents a fine early war scene !!!

 

[Jenny Croft]

Hiya Aleksandr ,

I did not comment on this before , It is a beautiful scene but I have thought something is missing .......... But what ???? .............

It came to me today , the guy walking onto the scene in the front corner , I think he does nothing for the story ...... SOOOOOO lose him BUT what I think would make a perfect story ? ........................ A horse team , maybe if you can imagine the crew have "borrowed" a farmers horse team to come and move the crippled vehicle . :cheer:

This would fill the gap , giving balance to the diorama and also would add lots more to the story than the figure that is there , I imagine a panzer crewman backing the horses , one would be a clydesdale . This would fit perfectly and interact with the other figures .

What do you think ?

Jenny :kiss:

 

[slodder]

The shed and hill are great. Elevations make dioramas very interesting. The Panzer is well done.
I have to agree the spacing is off. I like Jenny's suggestions. A twist could be loose the guy on the right, move the motorcycle forward and fill the back with civilian gear like a wagon.

 

[kolche]

Thanks you friends for attention to my work

 

[kolche]

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jenny croft wrote:

Hiya Aleksandr ,

I did not comment on this before , It is a beautiful scene but I have thought something is missing .......... But what ???? .............

It came to me today , the guy walking onto the scene in the front corner , I think he does nothing for the story ...... SOOOOOO lose him BUT what I think would make a perfect story ? ........................ A horse team , maybe if you can imagine the crew have "borrowed" a farmers horse team to come and move the crippled vehicle . :cheer:

This would fill the gap , giving balance to the diorama and also would add lots more to the story than the figure that is there , I imagine a panzer crewman backing the horses , one would be a clydesdale . This would fit perfectly and interact with the other figures .

What do you think ?

Jenny :kiss:

Thanks Jenny!
I liked your idea and I will think of it!