Still not taking the best shots but I think while not great the corrections I made have improve the look of the face.
James
Hi all,
Sorry for my rally late reply and to be a stranger lately, but life sometimes takes strange path..
Enough of my blurb.
James, I had a look and analised your pics.
Overall, I can say that your taste has less contrast compared to mine, which is not good or bad, just different, and world is beautiful because we are all different!
Pic1:
1: there is no contrast on the nose side, neither on top of the nostrils.Just add a little bit of a medium shadow on the side nose, add a point of light highlight on top of the nostrils. Remember to place the pure oil colour on the figure and blend it with a FULLY DRY and CLEAN brush
2:you should have a medium brown shadow on the eyebag and a really light line on the edge of the lower eyelid. Solution first paint the upper part of the eyebag with the highlights (so you don't need to trace a fine line on the edge of the lower eyelid).When dry add the shadow dropping the colour starting on the eyebags from the edge close to the nose to half of the eyebag then blend it the whole eyebag.
3:the highlight should be painted towards the back of the face. Just extend the highlight area
4:I think that you may have painted the shadow with a diluted colour, try to apply the shadow placing the medium reddish tone starting from the edge with the highlight.
5:is ok, my mistake...
1a/5a:you should have a medium brown shadow on the upper eyelid and a really light line on the edge. Solution as from point 2 above first paint the edge of the upper eyelid with the highlights so you don't need to trace a fine line.When dry add the shadow dropping the colour starting on recess of the upper eye.
2a:eyes, re-paint all with the acrylic base colour. a little trick, use magnifing glass as I do, and try to place a dot of dark colour in the middle using the edges of the mouth as reference.
3a: use a less violet tone here maybe, looks a little bit cyanotic, trying to add a more reddish tone.
4a:is ok, my mistake...
Ciao
Giovanni